Professional Assessment Activity 2 (feedback)

This week we had our second companion audit criticism on our portfolios and we needed to check and featured the majority of the errors we saw. We as a whole had around 80% of the portfolio done and generally the advancement was promising. A typical slip-up like introduction, fitting foundation pictures and punctuation were available in the majority of our portfolios.

The gathering pursued the sandwich rule in offering input to other gathering individuals. They are awed with the general advancement in the portfolio. In any case, they condemned my decision shading and size of the textual style in the about me page. My companions said that the textual style wasn't clear and it was hard for them to peruse the about me page. Likewise, they prescribe me to put more pictures on the landing page to make it more eye snappy to perusers and the image I had was insignificant to the subject and my Building field. they assisted me to discover attractive pictures and I liked what they prescribe to me. I went with their determination and took all their thought on the most proficient method to improve my landing page to pull in more perusers to my site Likewise when they were perusing my diaries they seen two or three spelling blunders and I had the request of the diaries wrong and one of my gathering individuals recommended me to utilize writes in my diaries. He said they looked progressively expert to the watchers. I liked his thought and I went with the blog design in my diary area.

Furthermore I also went to my tutor to get more feedback and he said I should add more content to my joiners and not just stick to word limit given.However, he did like my work and said it looked professional and he did like that I considered all the feedback given to in the first assessment activity. he also said that the font I used looks professional.